tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post7066611848822689358..comments2023-10-11T06:24:03.123-07:00Comments on jailene's awesome blog: to kill a mockingbird essayAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04197254282083983949noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-45437119144322628332018-11-15T15:12:04.457-08:002018-11-15T15:12:04.457-08:00not bad comments but god awful writingnot bad comments but god awful writingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03766748567289639683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-68285352832815766372016-06-02T10:58:36.513-07:002016-06-02T10:58:36.513-07:00You have to choose carefully. Evolution Writers o...You have to choose carefully. <a href="http://bit.ly/1X45IyA" rel="nofollow">Evolution Writers</a> offers a professional writing service. I highly recommend them. The papers are delivered on time and customers are their first priority. This is their website: <a href="http://bit.ly/1X45IyA" rel="nofollow">Evolution Writers</a> Jennifer Thompsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04609575546280599055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-12925530209328147032013-06-02T15:02:06.997-07:002013-06-02T15:02:06.997-07:001. your introduction talked about how killing a mo...1. your introduction talked about how killing a mockingbird is a sin.<br />2. i really liked your example using tom robinson because it shows how he is as fragile as a mockingbird and innocent too<br />3. your essay is very organized and easy to follow<br />4. you might want to check spellingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07470955115245475577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-24487241950634949762013-05-29T10:32:17.014-07:002013-05-29T10:32:17.014-07:001. I like your introduction it was good and short ...1. I like your introduction it was good and short to get me into the essay.<br />2. i really liked your last example that you had from the book.<br />3. one thing i really like about the essay is that you did a really good job spreading everything out in the essay.<br />4. i think you might want to look in the middle section of the essay because i think you could do a little better with the quotes.Karley Beyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02645066057268636257noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-78771508928688454272013-05-29T10:30:36.293-07:002013-05-29T10:30:36.293-07:001. The essay begins talking about how killing a mo...1. The essay begins talking about how killing a mockingbird is a sin. It also asks would you hurt someone who didn't hurt you.<br />2. "your fathers right, Mockingbirds don't do one thing but make music for us to enjoy. They don't eat up people's gardens, don't nest in corncribs, they don't do one thing but sing their hearts out for us. That's why it's a sin to kill a mockingbird"(119) was my favorite. it's my favorite because it talks about why killing mockingbirds is a sin.<br />3. The essay was very well organized, and i could follow along with the essay.<br />4. something to improve is capitalization in the beginning of sentences. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00777937542500255050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-50783130635397042982013-05-27T19:21:23.370-07:002013-05-27T19:21:23.370-07:001. The essay begins asking if you would ever hurt ...1. The essay begins asking if you would ever hurt someone who never hurt you.<br />2."We were nearly to the road when i felt Jem's hand leave me, felt him jerk backwards to the ground. More scuffling, and there came a dull crunching sound and Jem screamed." I really liked this quote.<br />3. I thought the word choice and writing style you had was really good.<br />4. Your essay was really good all that needs to be fixed is some misspelled words. Erica Plotnikiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18444540052527317510noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-44376793139459477622013-05-27T15:18:34.894-07:002013-05-27T15:18:34.894-07:001. The theme of this essay is that it frowned upon...1. The theme of this essay is that it frowned upon to kill a mockingbird. It is frowned upon to kill them because they mind their own business and don't cause any harm to anyone or anything.<br />2. I liked was the second one because it's messed up how people judge other people by what color they are.<br />3. This essay has good word choice and I like the fact that you used a real life situation to get us involved in whats really going on.\<br />4. everything was good, you dont need to change anythingAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17892026804377493658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-33566349974737101632013-05-24T11:46:00.472-07:002013-05-24T11:46:00.472-07:001. I love the way she started her essay. It was ve...1. I love the way she started her essay. It was very descriptive. <br />2. One of the three examples that I liked was the second one because it's messed up how people judge other people by what color they are. Plus it was very descriptive. <br />3. The one thing that this essay does well was basically all of it because I loved the way she organized everything and how she wrote her introduction.<br />4. Nothing on this essay needs some improvement because she did a really good job describing things and how well they fit in with each other. I loved all of it!!!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01372606828445273152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-52245809870189722522013-05-24T07:10:43.100-07:002013-05-24T07:10:43.100-07:00The theme of this essay is that it is a sin to kil...The theme of this essay is that it is a sin to kill a mockingbird. It is a sin to kill them because they mind their own business and don;t cause any harm to anyone or anything.<br /><br />The best example in my opinion is the last one, where jem and scout were walking and Bob Ewell decides to be rude and try to kill them. It does show how Scout and Jem are like mockingbirds and they were minding their own business.<br /><br />This essay's strength is the examples because they explained your thesis really well and you provided a lot of details to support your quotes. <br /><br />I think this essay was good.Maybe some improvements could be to not repeating phrases and some capitalization. Good job;)Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14188122098710965583noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6181504377408547347.post-74000602245411809392013-05-24T06:53:10.616-07:002013-05-24T06:53:10.616-07:001. Your essay starts very deep. The thesis is that...1. Your essay starts very deep. The thesis is that many people are fragile and you should not get stuck on the outside. <br /><br />2. I think that the example using Tom Robinson is the best. I think this because he is the main problem in the story so it makes sense to point out the fact that he's as fragile and innocent as a mockingbird.<br /><br />3. This essay has good word choice and I like the fact that you used a real life situation to get us involved in whats really going on.<br /><br />4. You should go back and check punctuation and capitalization. Other than that tres bien ! Maritza Romanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08558244325346650380noreply@blogger.com