Sometimes we get so caught up in everything around us that's been priced. Sometimes we forget all the priceless moments we have. Maybe it's because we don't see them but, they're there. Those special moments that you start to wish you can live your life, living in that moment. Sometimes we forget what's valuable in life, and we start to think that these priced items are our lives and we can't live without them. Well we're wrong the most important thing to us should be spending time with people we love, and with people that make us laugh so hard we embarrass ourselves. So, you can you think about this. Would you chose that memory that will make you giggle every time you think of it, or would you chose an item that can be replace or bought at any store?
Do you know that feeling of staying up all night, eating so much junk food that your stomach hurts, watching movies until its dawn, and giggles and laughter is all that’s heard about funny jokes. It's my special moment of having a sleep over with my best friends. Moments like that are what’s valuable in my life, they make me really happy and enthusiastic just thinking about everything we did that night. Spending time with friend and joking about everything is always fun. They turn your most horrible day into one of the best days ever. They bring us up, even when we feel no one can. They put our frown upside down. Friends love spending time with you. They want to spend sleep over and have extra fun together. A sleep over is a social gathering of a few friends getting together, to just be girls or to be just boys. We have so much fun, we forget about tomorrow. This is what a priceless moment is.
Items all around the world are sold everyday, and probably at every minute too. What makes one item more important than the rest? The ‘priced item’ that is favorite are my UGG boots. They're so comfortable. I asked for them last Christmas and I got two of them. I was so happy. Everyone had UGG’s so I wanted some too. They’re popular shoes now. These boots are awesome and I love wearing them. I try to wear my UGG’s with everything, so my mom gets mad at me and tells me, or screams at me to change my shoes, especially for church. Yeah, they make me excited just wearing them, and it also makes me feel special.
My items are similar because, since I love wearing my UGG’s, I wear them when I’m with my friends. They aren't similar in a lot of ways but, they can be compared in some. They both make me feel special and I always have fun with both. I always have an adventure when I have my UGG’s on, and when I’m with my friends as well. The days I spend with my friend I have the time of my life and the time I’m wearing my boots, I feel awesome or even amazing. These items, priced and priceless, are really important in my life, they just make everything better.
The sleepless nights of giggles, makeup and just making jokes are as different from my UGG’s. Those nights staying up until you can’t anymore are moments that I would trade for my boots as fast as a heart beat. Spending those priceless moments with my friends, mean the world to me mean more to me more than my boots will ever. I’m not saying I don’t love my boots, because I do, I just love the time with my friends. The times that our moms has to keep coming in the room to lower voice because we get too caught up in the moment. Those are the moments you can’t compare to anything else.
I value the sleep over with my friend more than my boots because, if my boots brake or get lost I, could go to any store that sell UGG’s and just buy it again. Also I can’t buy my friends; I can’t buy that moment we spend together. That special moment that we remember forever, that special moment that makes you laugh until you start to cry.
Almost everything in this world has a price on it. Between all that, we get so caught up in it we forget that we do have priceless moments. Moments that are beautiful, and you talk about forever. About how you felt and everything you did. You talk about it forever because you don’t want to forget about it. You want to stay fresh in your mind. You can’t compare moments like that to priced item you could buy one hundred of. You always have to try to remember there are moments of priceless beauty still out there. Just try to find you're own moment of true beauty.
1. Jailene is saying that the most valuable things in life are the moments you share with loved ones. She most strongly values sleepover with friends.
ReplyDelete2.Having sleepover with friends was more described. "Spending time with friend and joking about everything is always fun. They turn your most horrible day into one of the best days ever." This showed how much she valued and liked to be with her friends.
3. Her writing style and the introduction and conclusion was very strong. Both the conclusion and introduction made you think of what is valuable in life. The writing style was really good and it was easy to understand what she was talking about and trying to tell to the readers.
4.You might want to fix some grammar mistakes in the essay. But otherwise i thought it was very detailed and really good!